Poem
On September 15, 2008 | 7 Comments | Everett |

“To a Pig”

I’ve watched you now a full 50 seconds
Nibbling on that piece of corn
Snout like a boat in your grub.
Then what joy awaits you when you see a soggy
donut on a pancake.

This farm is mine, my father’s pigs,
My uncle’s silos, my mother’s barns.
Come often to me, fear no pork,
here lodge as in doughnut heaven.
We’ll talk of pancakes that took as long
to eat as twenty of them do now.

by Everett, 4th grade

Comments 7
Alli Rogers Posted September 15, 2008 at3:47 pm   Reply

Wow!!!! “Snout like a boat in your grub”, I love that line. 🙂 That is amazing! Looks like he takes after his mother!

leslie ruth Posted September 15, 2008 at4:40 pm   Reply

How wonderful! Only wish it could’ve been written in MY class 😉

Bill Posted September 16, 2008 at11:23 am   Reply

I too love the line – Snout like a boat in your grub. Brilliant! but I have always known that Everett was Brilliant.

Katie Posted September 16, 2008 at4:03 pm   Reply

Is Everett reading Sandburg?? Brilliant indeed!!

Lynne Posted September 17, 2008 at4:58 am   Reply

I love it! I’d love to know what Everett was thinking when he wrote this. Madelyn says she wishes it would rhyme. 🙂

Paul Marchbanks Posted September 17, 2008 at11:40 pm   Reply

Awesome!! you go, Everett.

Bill Posted September 18, 2008 at3:04 am   Reply

Everett tells me this poem is based on Wordsworth’s “To A Butterfly” http://www.blupete.com/Literature/Poetry/WordsworthButterfly.htmYou can see the similarities, but also the marvelous creativity in the differences.

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