Comments on: Poem

By: Bill

Bill — Thu, 18 Sep 2008 03:04:00 +0000

Everett tells me this poem is based on Wordsworth’s “To A Butterfly” http://www.blupete.com/Literature/Poetry/WordsworthButterfly.htmYou can see the similarities, but also the marvelous creativity in the differences.

Paul Marchbanks — Wed, 17 Sep 2008 23:40:00 +0000

Awesome!! you go, Everett.

Lynne — Wed, 17 Sep 2008 04:58:00 +0000

I love it! I'd love to know what Everett was thinking when he wrote this. Madelyn says she wishes it would rhyme. :-)

Katie — Tue, 16 Sep 2008 16:03:00 +0000

Is Everett reading Sandburg?? Brilliant indeed!!

Bill — Tue, 16 Sep 2008 11:23:00 +0000

I too love the line – Snout like a boat in your grub. Brilliant! but I have always known that Everett was Brilliant.

leslie ruth — Mon, 15 Sep 2008 16:40:00 +0000

How wonderful! Only wish it could’ve been written in MY class 😉

Alli Rogers — Mon, 15 Sep 2008 15:47:00 +0000

Wow!!!! “Snout like a boat in your grub”, I love that line. 🙂 That is amazing! Looks like he takes after his mother!